Don't you hate it when nobody reviews you? =]
Hey again Leim! I saw no1 had reviewed this so im taking the liberty =D
This is a soothing, calming experience almost like yoghurt.
Seriously it reminds me of yoghurt!
I think you could combine elements from this, and other songs you have written to create a song that would be just so epic it would make me cry
Now for the criticisms. =[] Actually theres not much more to say...
the drums seem a liiitle too harsh for this soothing song, but it also creates contrast that makes the soothing more.... i'm cut in half here, haha
it could also be a little bit longer and have a soaring melody to give it that extra lift
but hey i give it 97/100 and 5/5.