SilverLips's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ Chaos- Space Expo]

Not bad

It was a bit slow to start but when it got there it was cool
This has great potential :)
The instruments are all fighting, its like when the drum sounds the rest of the instruments disappear - try turning them all down, specially the drum, and then put the equaliser on max volume.

Overall, not bad

Darkfire96 responds:

Lol thanks for the review. Sorry im late. I had troubles to deal with. I know this song has great potential but thanks for saying that! it means alot. The instruments are fighting, but i liek the distortion. I actually made it so the kick drowns out everything. If i didn't then i would feel as though this was a traditional dance song, and i want to have my own style. Ill see if others dont like it. If you have any other suggestions feel free to PM me ok?
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[[Anatoxin]]

Intoxicating

I'm liking the bass synth - It's very catchy especially in combination with that smooth high instrument.
I think it would sound great with some chords, a pad synth.

Xyresic responds:

I'm not too big on chords... maybe in a future track. thanks for the review

[There is a Tomorrow]

Don't you hate it when nobody reviews you? =]

Hey again Leim! I saw no1 had reviewed this so im taking the liberty =D

This is a soothing, calming experience almost like yoghurt.
Seriously it reminds me of yoghurt!

I think you could combine elements from this, and other songs you have written to create a song that would be just so epic it would make me cry

Now for the criticisms. =[] Actually theres not much more to say...

the drums seem a liiitle too harsh for this soothing song, but it also creates contrast that makes the soothing more.... i'm cut in half here, haha

it could also be a little bit longer and have a soaring melody to give it that extra lift

but hey i give it 97/100 and 5/5.

[DoYouLikeSmileys]

JazzJackrabbit 2 and Super Aventure Island 2

This sounds like a cross between Jazz and SAI2, Lol
Good job with the sounds, they sound great.
Awesome intro
but -1 for no real recognisable melody
and -1 for the bassline repeating continuously the whole song, it could have gotten a lot more funky
I like your beats

[Dignus Est Intrare-Last Stand]

Very Epic

I like it. The sounds of the 'Cellos and Violin Solo and Choir and Piano and everything else were very good, what program do you use, or what samples?

The 'Cello riff was very awesome at the beginning, but it got kind of old after a while. I think you could have them playing the same notes but Tremolo instead.

The music cries for a french horn solo, some epic blast of fanfare to mark the last stand. (Horn solo at the beginning of the 4th movement from the New World Symphony by Dvorak is a good example)

I also think this calls for a "throbbing" bass drum line. Not a modern bass drum, a massive one like they use in concert bands and orchestras.

I absolutely love the violin solo, it is a very beautiful tune.

I think that you are a very good composer, but there is so much more that could be done to your music! You can do it

~Hope I have helped you
~SilverLips

Leimrey responds:

Wow! Now this is really something I can work with! It is sometimes hard if everybody tell you "its okay" or "its sh*t"...

Thank you very, very, very ( did I mention "very"? ) much!

Please stay tuned for more of my creations! It seems you have some experience in music as well and with reviews like yours I could definitely improve a lot more!

P.S: Well I was using Fruity Loops back then! And I used even though it was a quite simple track quite a lot of samples. Just P.M me if you have more questions =)

[[DN] Techno Rocker {Remix}]

Nice one!

I like this, especially the bouncy piano.

What LK412 said is right, the kicks arent loud enough.
However, you can get some nice hard kicks from VEC, just search "vec kicks" on google and it's the first link. Can also get cymbals and basses from there.

Keep up the good work, DanceNation!

DanceNation responds:

yea i like the bouncyness too.
I use all vec, but i guess people want an even LOUDER kick :)

[Newgrounds On Speed]

Very nice

I think you were inspired by Pirates of the Carribean song, especially at the start.
Am I right?
Anyway pretty good.

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Ummm..... No.

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

HOO!

i love this! LOVE THE HOO! i can hear some random bagpipes in it, maybe its just me.

[Dream of Air - F-777]

WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

WOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOWOWOOOW!!!!!!!
Makes me wanna jump off a building and fly!!!!!!!! WOOOOOT INTENSE luv it <3

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much silver =).

[Operation: Evolution]

Operation successful!

This is an awesome piece of intense epic awesome brilliant music, love 2:12 - 2:16 the best.
Only reservations i hav is sometimes all the parts move up and down at the same time, so its a little unbalanced, mostly in the first minute and a half.
Maybe its just me, im a stickler for symmetry lol
But otherwise its awwwwwesome!
I LOOOOOOOVE the tune at 3:00 to 4:00!!!!! makes me laugh! YAY